For all you fans out there.
Oh yea, lots and lots of fans are apparent, from the overwhelming comments! Well, as you know the lack of update on the story is due to the stupid trip. But here you go, the next chapter. This is my first time writing action sequences, so it may not be all that easy to follow. Once again, feel free to leave suggestions, criticisms, etc. in the comments section. Oh, I think I created a psychotic character.
Follow this and click on Chapter Two
Follow this and click on Chapter Two
posted by Psychopathic Puffin at 8:14 AM
1 Comments:
Somehow you always manage to surprise me. I was expecting Tisiphone to catch up with Shawn (her being a local and knowing a few shortcuts, most likely) and a confrontation between the two. And then perhaps Shawn would show some magical power that he did not know he possessed and erase her memory of what he did to Serra. ANd then they be friends, til one day the magic fades and Tisiphone goes and kills him for revenge. But I think that's too typical.
You are right, fight scenes are tough to write. However, the good news is that I can probably draw coresponding manga pics from what you have written.
ps: you should invent swear words instead of using ours.
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